In East of Eden, John Steinbeck effectively ties three
generations together to create a fascinating book, although the character
development department is definitely lacking. Aron, Liza, Adam, Cathy... all
are flat and unsurprising. Aron is forgettable (compared to interesting
and spontaneous Cal), Adam is
boring and unfortunately in love with the wrong woman for the majority of the
book - the woman, in fact, also being too predictable. She’s evil, and that’s
about it. There is no growth, no maturation. In contrast, Cal
is a rather round character, with complex issues. He struggles with the
jealousy of Aron, fluctuating between the concept of good and evil. Other
characters embrace just one for the duration of the book, and yet Cal
is the main expresser of timshel. True, it can be argued that this is Cal’s
story, but his emotions run deeper than the other main characters. Abra is also
seen as a rounder character, which is almost strange when most of Steinbeck’s female characters are flat: Liza, Cathy, Alice,
Mollie, Dessie, and more. They’re nearly all side characters with one
personality that defines them; for example, Mollie and Dessie are the ‘sweet
ones’. We see Abra change, however, over the course of the book, as seen when
she challenges her relationship with Aron. I suppose Aron was a bit too
forgettable to her too, since like me, she obviously prefers Cal.
Generally, the plot is engaging. It’s fast-paced enough to capture my attention and prevent dragging, but not so fast that the developments seem rushed and unrealistic. The winding descriptions of the land may be necessary but can slow the book down in some of its most suspenseful and tense moments. I suppose, though, that’s what just adds to the suspense.
A good book, in my eyes, is a book makes you want to know the characters, meet them, and look into their eyes and have a conversation and feel what you feel when you read their dialogue. When you want to delve into the plot and wish the characters were people you know in real life... that’s a good book.
John Steinbeck creates these characters. I want to be friends with Cal, have a deep conversation with Abra and cook with Lee. That being said, I would pass over a day with Adam or Cathy - I know what they’d do, and that just takes away the excitement of it all.
4 comments:
I enjoyed reading the second-to-last paragraph. I now know you want to look into Cal's eyeballs... :) but yeah nice going here on this review.
While reading your review, I originally disagreed with your initial statement, but as I read the review, I began to agree with it. The part about timshel could've been explained slightly more since a portion of readers will have no idea what the term means. The first paragraph I feel could've been trimmed to match the rest of the review, but the final two paragraphs were well written and help spark interest in the novel for readers, and also give the reader some insight on what your opinion a good book should contain. Overall a very good review.
I really liked your review Monica. It's simple but to the point, and I liked how you took the perspective of what you didn't like of the book instead of praising what you liked at first. You did a great job, haha. :D
Monica,
I liked this review very much. You start off strong with your opinion right in the first sentence - "effectively ties three generations together...although character development is lacking." You weren't afraid to be critical but tap in to the subtlety of what Steinbeck does well. You're a strong writer, to be sure. Thanks for sharing this review!
- Mrs. Jaffe
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